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slowlyunfoldingi can't reach you
[if ever i could]
untangle the lines
that separate us
filter the static
just to tell you
(nothing)
whatever I forgot
or couldn't say
the first time
so distracted
we lost our place
on the page
[if ever i could]
untangle the lines
that separate us
filter the static
just to tell you
(nothing)
whatever I forgot
or couldn't say
the first time
so distracted
we lost our place
on the page
(no subject)
Date: 2004-12-29 04:46 am (UTC)Lovely.
Great structure; really conveys this quiet, somewhat lost feeling, and I love it.
(no subject)
Date: 2004-12-29 05:23 am (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2004-12-29 05:49 am (UTC)